这......

这孩子好机智_(:з」∠)_

目测是一篇300多字的合格作文

太TM机智了

凑字数。。。。态度就不对。。。。

就是徒步方队要写全受阅部队也蛮困难的。至少这小孩还是花费一番功夫的。

这是大人写来骗你们的，孩子才没这么傻呢。我姑娘都要想到“鸦片战争导致了手工作坊式的经济开始解体”了

我媳妇倒是傻傻的记了一堆方队名称

这孩子是贴吧灌水灌出来的吧

七、八岁的孩子就会有很多感想的吧，至少威武雄壮、自豪感什么的毫无问题

七、八岁的孩子就会有很多感想的吧，至少威武雄壮、自豪感什么的毫无问题

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这就是中国的学生们得为国家大阅兵做的事
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This Is What Chinese Schoolkids Were Made To Do For The Country’s Big Military Parade龙腾网 http://www.ltaaa.com

这就是中国的学生们得为国家大阅兵做的事

Imagine having to write an essay about the missiles you just saw marched down the street.

试想像你要为刚刚街上经过的导弹写一篇作文
2015年9月15日

1. For most Chinese citizens, watching this month’s huge military parade commemorating the 70th anniversary of the end of WWII was just a bit of entertainment. That wasn’t the case for China’s school-aged children though.

对中国的绝大多数人来说，看一场纪念二战70周年的阅兵只不过是一种娱乐。但对于中国的学生们来说，可没有这么好的事。



Many Chinese children, from elementary to high school students, were asked by schools to draft an essay — ranging somewhere between a reported 300- to 900-words — during the three-day national holiday created for the military parade earlier this month.

在中国，很多小学至中学的儿童在阅兵带来的三天假期中被赋予了一项额外的功课，写一篇关于阅兵的300字至900字的作文。

[copy]It remains unclear whether the assignment was a national order, but sources in east China’s Zhejiang province and a report from a news portal in south China’s Hainan province both show that local schools handed out essays as a mandatory assignment for students. Less formally, hundreds of results mentioning the military parade essay have been posted on Weibo from users spread throughout China.

虽然不知道这是不是国家下达的命令，但浙江省和海南省的学校都将写阅兵作文当作了一项强制功课。另外，在微博上的各地人民都有讨论到阅兵作文一事.

Some of the authors of those essays (or their parents) posted their handwritten pieces on Weibo, providing a rare opportunity to have a peek into their thoughts.

一些作文的作者或是他们的父母将他们的作品发上了微博，让我们可以一窥他们的想法。[/copy]

2. Some students found a way to get around the whole “original ideas” part of essay writing.

一些学生聪明的规避了关于作文要“原创”的规定



“The length, the scale, and the effects of Chinese people’s actions against Japanese-fascists are phenomenal,” the person who posted this on Weibo allegedly wrote.

“中国人民抗击日本法西斯时间之长，规模之大，作用之巨，是举世瞩目的。“一位上传者这样写道。

“70 years later, the historical alarm is still ringing, but right-wing Japanese are still openly trampling on international orders, and trying to reverse the verdict of history…,” they continued.

“70年后的今天，历史的警示仍在，日本右翼势力却屡次公然践踏国际秩序，企图为侵略历史翻案。“他继续写道。

That might sound familiar to their teacher though: “I was afraid I’ll copy the same sample online as my classmates, so I came up with an idea – that I copy a paragraph from one sample article, that way my essay will be combined with four different samples, I’m so brilliant.”

对他们的老师来说，这些话看起来可能比较耳熟：“我怕如果我直接像同学一样抄范文的话会被发现，所以我只抄不同范文的某一段。我的作业是用4段范文拼出来的，我太机智了！”

3. Others needed to learn when to tone down their enthusiasm a little.

一些学生则需要把他们的热情度调低一点



“As soon as the clock ticks 10, I rushed to the living room like a flash of lightning and turned on the TV,” another young user wrote.

“刚到10点，我如同闪电一样跑到客厅，”另一个作者这样写道。

“In a little while, state leaders all showed up! All of them! It was sunny on Tiananmen Square and a lot of pupils were there, formed a square with fresh flowers, as long as you look at it, you know it’s a grandiose military parade,” the one continues. “The scene [of Xi Jinping inspecting troops] was thrilling! I was almost about to cry!”

“不一会儿，国家领导人都到场了！全部都来了。天安门广场天气晴朗，很多小学生，用鲜花摆了一个阵型，一看，就知道是大阅兵，”他继续写道。“那场景（习近平阅兵）真是震撼人心，我的心情激动地都要流泪了！”

4. Some of them not only watched the live broadcast, but also reviewed the parade later so as to write a good essay, according to a mother’s account on Weibo.

有些母亲在微博上提到：“孩子们不但看阅兵直播，还为了能写出好的文章再看一遍阅兵重播。”



5. Some chose to highlight what they liked most about the parade, like this student who focused on a single WWII veteran that attended the parade.

一些学生选择着重描叙他们喜欢的阅兵部分，像是参与检阅的二战老兵部队。



“The most heart-wrenching troop was the veteran one. See, a group of old soldiers slowly walked across Tiananmen Square. Their faces are covered with wrinkles, their hairs are all white, they must be at least 90 years old,” goes an essay uploaded by a mother self-identified as being from Zhejiang.

“最让我感动的要数老兵部队了。只见老兵部队从天安门南缓缓走过。那些老兵满脸皱纹，满头白发，少说也90岁以上了，”一位浙江母亲上传的作文上这样写道。

[copy]“But they raised their old arms — although they couldn’t even straighten them nor put together fingers — and paid perfect salute to President Xi,” the essay goes. “I’m so touched. They fought in wars 70 years ago regardless of their own safety for our peace and happiness today.”

“但他们仍然举起那苍老的，伸不直，并不拢的右手，向习主席敬了个标准的军礼。我不由得心中感动。他们70年前在战火中不顾生死，拼命奋战，才换来了我们现在的和平与幸福。”作者这样写道。

“The kid writes better than I did years ago,” the author of the Weibo post wrote.

“这孩子写的比我以前还好，”博主这样说道。 [/copy]

6. This student appeared to confuse “essay” with “list of different platoons that marched in the parade.”

这个学生好像把“作文”和“记阅兵流水账”搞混了。



“Ah! It’s about the time to watch the military parade. I was very excited at that moment and was trying to imagine how that would be,” goes an essay uploaded by a user who seems to be a schoolteacher from east China’s Jiangsu province.

“呀！要看阅兵式了。我当时非常激动，想象着阅兵式是什么样的电视（译注：我按原文摘抄的。），“这是一篇由江苏省老师上传的作文。

“There are troops of aerial flag carriage, veterans, honor guards, Mt. Langya Five Hero Model Soldiers, Battle of Pingxingguan Ambush Model Soldiers…” The whole essay named 28 different groups of soldiers and sailors, so we figured it’s better to stop here before bore everybody.

“那里有空中护旗梯队，老兵方队，三军仪仗队，狼牙山五壮士英雄部队方队，平型关大战突击连英模部队...” 整篇作文列出了28个不同的部队和军队名称，我就不一一摘录，以免闷到各位了。

The teacher’s review: “total nonsense!”

老师在他的评语上写道：“废话连篇！”

7. Without even reading we can safely conclude that this one with drawings of willow leaves and doves is the best essay ever. Ever.

就算不读文章，我们也可以说这篇画上了柳树枝与和平鸽的作文绝对是有史以来最好的作文了。



8. This kid who is on #TeamBlueTank clearly has the right idea when it comes to military hardware.

这个#TeamBlueTank（译注：蓝色坦克队，估计是个哏...）的孩子对军事很感兴趣



“Many military wagons, airplanes, tanks and medical transports are cool. My favorite one is a blue tank among them, it’s sharp and good-looking, as well as aggressive,” the essay reads. “I like the military parade a lot.”

“我还看了很多战车，飞机、坦克、医用车。都很霸气。我最喜欢其中的一个蓝色的坦克很厉害很好看，也很霸气。”作文这样写道， “我非常喜欢阅兵。”

9. A 3rd grader wrote, “In the end, white doves symbolizing peace were flied [sic], and colorful balloons were released. After watching the uplifting military parade today, [I believe] our great motherland would become more prosperous.”
一个三年级学生写道：“最后，放飞了象征和平的白鸽鸽，又放飞了五彩六色的气球。今天看了振奋人心的大阅兵，我们伟大的祖国会更加繁荣富强。”



10. But for homework-laden students, having yet another essay was less than thrilling. A user wrote, “[Today I have] two physics papers, three maths papers, half an English newspaper, an 800-word argumentation, and a 1000-word military parade essay.”

但对于功课负担重的学生来说，又增添一项功课实在太可怕了。一位博主写道“今天我有2张物理卷子，3张数学卷子，半张英语报纸，一篇800字的议论文，一篇1000字的阅兵作文。”



Note: This is only two weeks into the new semester.

注：这才刚开学两周。

11. There was no escape, even for users who thought they’d managed to complete the assignment. A user wrote on Weibo, “When I finally squeezed 1,000 words out, one of my colleagues told me it has to be at least 3,000 words.”

一波未平一波又起，一位以为自己完成了功课的博主写道，“当我终于难产完1000字必写作文的时候，却被同事告知至少3000字。 ”




She continues, “Can we not have to hand in essays after watching the anti-fascist military parade?”

她继续写道， “看完反法西斯阅兵能不征文不？ ”

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Kanisha Wooten · 16 hrs
These kids are well spoken/written. As far as the anti china undertones, it's no different than US kids being forced to say the pledge of allegiance every day and being forcefed blind patriotism. Adults brainwash kids all over the world, no ones way is better or more justified than any other.

这些孩子们都写得很好。不管反中的那些人怎么说，就像美国孩子要被迫盲目爱国和每天背忠诚宣言一样，全世界的大人们都在洗自己孩子的脑。没有说哪种方法更好更正义的。

Anthony Duan · Fort Richmond Collegiate · 14 hrs
That was so beautifully said

说得很好

OS Abahi · Dubai, United Arab Emirates · 14 hrs
Well said.

说得好

Steve Davy · Owner Operator at Merritt/Kamloops lumber sales · 14 hrs
"Today I forced a child to do something, something I wouldn't do except if I was being paid, because I, or some other authority figure, thinks it's good for them"
-Adults

“今天我逼孩子去做一些我自己都不愿意义务去做的事，因为我，或者一些权威机构觉得，这对孩子好。”
——大人

Ke Ren
Yes. Just as what everyone said: for education, sometimes we should let our children know our history and also learn to cherish today's life. But we should choose the right way, not in an usual routin.

对。就像所有人说：为了教育，我们有时需要让我们的孩子了解历史，学懂今天的生活是多么珍贵。但我们应该用正确的方法，而不是强塞硬灌。

上面转的龙腾的，歪果人已经堕落到攻击中国的小学生了，可笑可笑

这孩子好可爱

外行看热闹，内行看门道，不是内外行，随便尿一泡。

老师凭什么说别个废话连篇。我看是这老师有问题、人家写这么多那也是查了好多资料的

歪果仁居然有兴趣专门讨论中国小孩子的作文

三年级的孩子不是傻子，能理解阅兵式。

这孩子机智啊

至少这孩子纪实，比起那些写出超越年龄很多的政治作文的孩子来，这个孩子更真实。

我家五年级的孩子字写的还没三年级写的好

超大和谐战舰 发表于 2015-9-19 15:59
上面转的龙腾的，歪果人已经堕落到攻击中国的小学生了，可笑可笑
很多“情歌历史”

想当年写读书笔记，我就是把书的第二 页主要段落抄一遍 孙便加一点自由发挥

这么熟~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

凑字数，以前写周记我也这么干，老师就呵呵了……

现在歪果仁的媒体已经把对中国孩子的攻击方向从死读书考高分转到被迫学习各种技能上了。。。。。
最近几年出去的孩子对他们心里冲击太大，比如同事的亲戚移民澳大利亚，闺女上的墨尔本教会学校，结果，因为钢琴弹的好，学校各类活动立马成了名人。。。。
听同事说这小姑娘回来跟他们讲，歪果仁弱爆了，现在信心爆棚了。。。。这小姑娘原来在国内可算不上出色，学钢琴也是半途而废。。

如果这作文是真的，不是大人编出来的话，还是教育出问题了。
很明显就是凑字数，这种作文是态度问题，不是水平问题。
学生根本没把阅兵放在心上，学校的爱国教育绝对出问题了。

爱国教育还是要贯彻到平常。。。。试问。。现在读书的。。小学生。。。有几个。。真正近距离接触过PLA的装备？各军种开放日。。又有多少孩子去呢？

家长要是看到孩子喜欢这些武器装备啥的。。。绝大部分还是会叫孩子吧注意力集中在读书上。。。

爱国尚武的精神的确要从小培养。。但是不是培养戾气十足，不动脑子，只会动手的傻逼。

挺实在的小家伙。

这是大人写来骗你们的，孩子才没这么傻呢。我姑娘都要想到“鸦片战争导致了手工作坊式的经济开始解体”了
纯人云亦云，她知道这句话背后的逻辑关系么