超级军网女儿的日记
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好乖的女儿啊:lol :lol
不简单...是个好苗子...;P :victory: ...
一年级就写出这么好的文章，这娃娃了得
很可爱```
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原帖由 大嘴马 于 2008-4-2 00:48 发表
不简单...是个好苗子...;P :victory: ...
只挑了几篇好的，呵呵，差劲的都不敢给大家看了。
原帖由 不为人知 于 2008-4-2 00:49 发表
一年级就写出这么好的文章，这娃娃了得
实际上原文中许多都是拼音，而且许多没有标点符号，个别地方也不通顺。
:b 要看原文...
厉害啊。。。
不知是谁惹怒了太阳公公？
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飞妞...:D
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飞妞...:D
把原文发上来啊，还是写得有意思，错误也没什么啊，那才是原版的啊
原帖由 讨虏校尉 于 2008-4-2 00:53 发表
实际上原文中许多都是拼音，而且许多没有标点符号，个别地方也不通顺。
你要求也太高了吧
可别拔苗助长哈
原帖由 天边的风 于 2008-4-2 01:01 发表
把原文发上来啊，还是写得有意思，错误也没什么啊，那才是原版的啊
原文……用田格本写的，一篇就占一页，这几篇就有半本。俺没有扫描仪，发不上来啊。
老师要家长把打勾的日记打出来，交上去。这个就是完成老师交办的任务，顺便发出来了。
老师要家长把打勾的日记打出来，交上去。
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现在的老师:L
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现在的老师:L
DC，手机也可以啊，文字输入到电脑里看起来就没原来有感觉了
今天太晚了，改天我用相机拍两张发上来吧。
呵呵``````
单纯点好````
楼主给你女儿看CCTV吗?~
单纯点好````
楼主给你女儿看CCTV吗?~
从小就爱学习的好孩子啊:b
还没有和谐么？:o
原帖由 大嘴马 于 2008-4-2 01:01 发表
不知是谁惹怒了太阳公公？
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飞妞...:D
于是大嘴马大叔遭到雷劈;P ;P
太阳当空照...飞妞上学校...马马说...早早早...你为什么背上炸药包...:D
你都有女儿啦？！那你不是鼎盛原来的那个校尉啊，见鬼，一直认错人了:L
我写文章就像女人生孩子:D
这个 是日记
不是作文阿
不是作文阿
童年真美好啊
幸福的一家啊
好佩服这个娃娃啊，写的这么好！:victory:
原帖由 讨虏校尉 于 2008-4-2 01:06 发表
原文……用田格本写的，一篇就占一页，这几篇就有半本。俺没有扫描仪，发不上来啊。
老师要家长把打勾的日记打出来，交上去。这个就是完成老师交办的任务，顺便发出来了。
我还想问你女儿允许你看日记？原来是奉旨看日记。
乖乖女啊。
不会吧,才一年纪就是认这么多字,能写这么长的日纪了
扫描，上原文～～～
养个女儿也不错啊～
养个女儿也不错啊～
一年级:o 不简单呀,偶记得好多人三年级还把话写不利索呢:D
你滴女儿好可爱哦
楼主的女儿真的好可爱。我女儿今年都9岁了，中文还写不了这么好呢。虽然我在家里老督促她学习，但是没有中文的环境就是没辙。
我愿意跟大家分享一下我女儿写的英文文章。见笑了。
Juli Jones Mysteries & Small Cases:
1. As Juli went inside the bathroom of Mack’s Shoe Repair Shop, a mother was looking in the mirror and fixing her hair to make sure she looked good. Two of her kids were behind her back playing. Juli watched the little ones play. Then she glanced at the mother and said, “Your kids are so cute.”
The mother turned around. “Thanks, but they can be annoying.” Juli smiled and frowned at the same time. She couldn’t imagine a mother saying stuff about her children that could break their hearts, but she guessed this one just did.
She started toward the bathroom, looking inside every one making sure they’re clean to use. Just as the tip of her fingernails touched the doorknob, she heard a “SPLAT!” from the kids. She ran back and saw one child crying. The mother was staring at them, then, without a word, she spanked the child that wasn’t crying, but then he started crying, too.
Juli wanted to say something that made them feel better. “Are you okay? Please don’t cry, uh.” She remembered the Mini Bunny Scout Plushy she held in her pocket. She took it out and squeezed it. The plush started waving its hands up and down and kept saying, “I’m a bunny scout!” The two children stopped crying and glared at the toy.
The mother scolded, “Kevin, why did you slap Emma?” She looked angrily at Kevin, the one who slapped Emma.
“But I didn’t!” Kevin whined as the mother begun to pick up Emma.
“Yes you did. I saw you, you know you did it, Kevin boy. Now say you’re sorry to Emma before I have to whack you. Say it, Kevin, say it!” The mom looked angrier as Kevin started to cry, and Juli felt bad for the kids.
“I didn’t! I didn’t! I did no-o-o-t!” Kevin screeched and screamed. “I am not lying! I didn’t slap Emma! I promise! Don’t make me say sorry! I didn’t…” His voice wailed off and began to form into hiccups. Then he said, “I didn’t. I know I didn’t. I won’t say sorry. You don’t whack me, because I didn’t.”
Juli squeezed the plushy again. Kevin’s hiccups were gone. After that, the mother looked up at Juli, and she carried her kids out the door. Juli dropped her toy in amazement. This family needed some help. Well, they already left. Oh well.
As Juli walked back towards the bathrooms, she thought, I can’t believe it, but the mother was right. Kevin did hit Emma. And I can prove it if anyone asks me!
Question: How did Juli prove that Kevin did slap Emma and how did she know? Read below to find out.
Answer: Since the mother was looking in the mirror, she could see anything happening behind her back. So if Kevin and Emma were playing behind her back, she would’ve seen everything that they did.
我愿意跟大家分享一下我女儿写的英文文章。见笑了。
Juli Jones Mysteries & Small Cases:
1. As Juli went inside the bathroom of Mack’s Shoe Repair Shop, a mother was looking in the mirror and fixing her hair to make sure she looked good. Two of her kids were behind her back playing. Juli watched the little ones play. Then she glanced at the mother and said, “Your kids are so cute.”
The mother turned around. “Thanks, but they can be annoying.” Juli smiled and frowned at the same time. She couldn’t imagine a mother saying stuff about her children that could break their hearts, but she guessed this one just did.
She started toward the bathroom, looking inside every one making sure they’re clean to use. Just as the tip of her fingernails touched the doorknob, she heard a “SPLAT!” from the kids. She ran back and saw one child crying. The mother was staring at them, then, without a word, she spanked the child that wasn’t crying, but then he started crying, too.
Juli wanted to say something that made them feel better. “Are you okay? Please don’t cry, uh.” She remembered the Mini Bunny Scout Plushy she held in her pocket. She took it out and squeezed it. The plush started waving its hands up and down and kept saying, “I’m a bunny scout!” The two children stopped crying and glared at the toy.
The mother scolded, “Kevin, why did you slap Emma?” She looked angrily at Kevin, the one who slapped Emma.
“But I didn’t!” Kevin whined as the mother begun to pick up Emma.
“Yes you did. I saw you, you know you did it, Kevin boy. Now say you’re sorry to Emma before I have to whack you. Say it, Kevin, say it!” The mom looked angrier as Kevin started to cry, and Juli felt bad for the kids.
“I didn’t! I didn’t! I did no-o-o-t!” Kevin screeched and screamed. “I am not lying! I didn’t slap Emma! I promise! Don’t make me say sorry! I didn’t…” His voice wailed off and began to form into hiccups. Then he said, “I didn’t. I know I didn’t. I won’t say sorry. You don’t whack me, because I didn’t.”
Juli squeezed the plushy again. Kevin’s hiccups were gone. After that, the mother looked up at Juli, and she carried her kids out the door. Juli dropped her toy in amazement. This family needed some help. Well, they already left. Oh well.
As Juli walked back towards the bathrooms, she thought, I can’t believe it, but the mother was right. Kevin did hit Emma. And I can prove it if anyone asks me!
Question: How did Juli prove that Kevin did slap Emma and how did she know? Read below to find out.
Answer: Since the mother was looking in the mirror, she could see anything happening behind her back. So if Kevin and Emma were playing behind her back, she would’ve seen everything that they did.
原帖由 帕奇诺夫 于 2008-4-3 08:08 发表
楼主的女儿真的好可爱。我女儿今年都9岁了，中文还写不了这么好呢。虽然我在家里老督促她学习，但是没有中文的环境就是没辙。
我愿意跟大家分享一下我女儿写的英文文章。见笑了。
Juli Jones Mysteries & Smal ...
怕妻懦夫看来比较那啥。
怕妻懦夫;P
要是能坚持多发一些就好啦，精华在等着楼主哇。
哇，版主大锅、pu大、贵宾……还有这么多兄弟都来捧场，并提出殷切希望和谆谆教导，俺真是受宠若惊了。
加精就不要了吧，不过任务俺一定完成。
加精就不要了吧，不过任务俺一定完成。
可以去告你,侵犯他人那个什么....
一年纪能写成这样？不敢相信啊:o
原帖由 yougiveme 于 2008-4-2 02:36 发表
呵呵``````
单纯点好````
楼主给你女儿看CCTV吗?~
我也感觉这孩子肯定经常看CCTV:D